Laythan's path is finished! After adding in three extra chunks it’s finally
done. I haven’t been over it to edit it yet but I want to leave it a week or
two so I can look over it with a fresh eye. So now that it’s complete I have
found myself at a loss for what to do... My evenings suddenly seem so long and
empty without it. It looks like I'll be getting back down to the artwork and
concepts. Aside from that I need to work out the timing of all the events in Rheeven’s
path to match up to Laythan's. The most difficult part about this is that
Rheeven and D'rosk's paths are heavily intertwined by a character named
Xenison, whose actions are very important to the overall progression of
each path. Since D’rosk’s story still isn’t clear cut I'm going to have
difficulty with Rheeven's.
Even so, I'm itching to start writing Rheeven's path. The world he has to
deal with is really coming into focus and I feel for him over the adversities
he faces which means I'm becoming attached to him. Once I become attached to
all the characters the story writes itself. My only obstacle is the timing parameters.
So with Laythan's path standing at 112 266 words and set to loose a good few
hundred of scene descriptions once the artwork is complete, I'm estimating the
final number to be at 111 000. Rheeven’s is probably going to reach about an
estimated 90 000 tops and D’rosk’s will most likely be around the same. At that
sheer amount of story you'll certainly be getting value for money!
Haha I like Laythan he is a idiot and I like idiots in stories or shows cos they create laughter and hysterics, so far Laythan has made me laugh a fair bit and i not read a huge amount yet. This seems very interesting as well I miss your stories like this I can't wait to hear more about it
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